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Monday, 9 September 2019

Similes and Metaphors Worksheet

Similes 
A simile is a statement used to describe something by comparing it to something else. For example, Mike's been as busy as a bee this week. When we compare how busy Mike has been to a bee it helps us to imagine just how busy he has been. Similes use words such as like, as or such to compare the thing being described.
A. Use a word from the box below to complete each sentence.

doornail   cucumber silk   honey ox peas     pancake whistle thieves  clockwork fox fiddle

1. These peaches are as sweet as honey
2. The twins are alike as peas in a pod
3. This material is as smooth as silk
4. The thief is no doubt as crafty as a fox
5. After his stay in hospital Mike is now as fit as a  fidle 
6. These friends are as thick as theives
7. During the fire he stayed as cool as a cucumber
8. After it was washed my shirt was as clean as a whistle
9. The new boy is as strong as an ox
10. The postie comes as regular as clockwork
11. After it was run over it was as flat as a pancake
12. The old tree is now as dead as a doornail

B. Choose a word from the below to complete each simile.

ice   bell coal   mule gold swan   kitten eel snail   rain leather toast

1. As warm as toast
2. As tough as leather
3. As right as rain
4. As black as coal
5. As playful as a kitten
6. As sound as a bell
7. As graceful as a swan
8. As good as gold
9. As stubborn as a mule 
10. As slow as a snail
11. As cold as ice 
12. As slippery as an eel

C. Make up your own similes. Simply compare a person you know or any object to something else that has certain qualities. Remember to use like, as or such.
Simile One : As slow as a sloth
Simile Two : As fast as a cheetah
Simile Three : As tired as a tiger

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Metaphors  are used to make prose or poetry more colourful. We form metaphors by saying (or comparing) something is something else, 
e.g. "The grass was a carpet of green."
Here is a famous example:
The Highwayman by Alfred Noyes
The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees
 The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy Seas, 
The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor, 
And the highwayman came riding -- 
Riding -- riding -- 
And the Highwayman came riding up to the old inn door.

In this verse the poet has used four metaphors. He compares the wind to a torrent of darkness; the moon to a ghostly galleon; the road to a ribbon of moonlight; the clouds to a rough sea. 
Here are some more metaphors: 
When he left he broke my heart.
My blood curdled when I heard the noise.
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A. Underline the metaphor in each sentence. The first one has been done for you. You’re welcome :) 
1.  I like Sally because she is always full of beans.
2. Tom is a wet blanket all the time. 
3. The coal-black night was quiet. 
4. My blood boiled when I heard the results. 
5. At football Sam was a giant. 
6. Tom is a big fish in a little pond. 
7. Mike can be hard hearted. 
8. After my win, I was light headed. 
9. She came home walking on air. 
10. Matthew is down in the dumps. (Continue on with the next page, please.)

B. Create a metaphor or a simile to add interest to these sentences. The first example is done for you. 
1. Sam is crazy. He is as mad as a hatter. 
2. Tam is always happy. She is a pig in mud
3. My dog runs quickly. It is a lightning bolt
4. Sally feels lonely. She is a small fish in a big pond

C. Write metaphors saying what each of these things are. Use vivid descriptions.
1. Stars are freflies in the night sky.
2. Clock are n
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Special FXs in Creative Writing: Personification, Onomatopoeia, Alliteration



   
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Most of our favourite films and videos have Special FX
eg Star Wars, Jurassic Park, The Matrix.

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Did you know that there are Special FX you can use in your writing??




1.  Visual Special FX


A special way of helping a reader to imagine an unfamiliar scene, or to see a familiar scene through your eyes, is to use comparisons

(a) A simile
a comparison of two things usually using "like" or "as".
eg He ate the chocolate like a pig eating scraps.

(b) Metaphor
a comparison of two things where one is said to be the other.
eg He made a pig of himself with the chocolate.

Another powerful visual special effect is:

(c) Personification 
the giving of human qualities to nonhuman things.
eg The sun was angry.

Revision exercises




Exercise 1

Complete these sentences with examples of personification to make them interesting for readers. 
  1. The waves were calm 
  2. Clouds are gray
  3. The train is being personified
  4. Fear is a nightmare
  5. The bulldozer is a beast
  6. Bells are ringing

2.  Sound Special FX


(a) Onomatopoeia 
words which sound like what they mean.
eg He slurped his tea from the saucer.
(b) Alliteration
the repetition of consonant sounds at the beginning of different words close together.
eg Bonzo builds bouncing babies.

Compare these two paragraphs:



Paragraph 1: The hunter fired, and the three deer bolted into the bush. He cursed, and ran after them.

Paragraph 2: Crack! The sound of the rifle echoed through the valley. At once the three deer bolted for the bush. "Blast," muttered the hunter, and crashed off through the trees after them.

  • Both of these paragraphs are telling the same story. 
  • The difference between the two is that the second one gets greater impact by using simple sound effects eg the use of such sound words (crack, muttered, crashed) is an easy way to add life and zip to your writing.

Revision exercises


Exercise 2

Come up with a sound affect word for each of these
eg a racquet hitting a tennis ball = pock
1 an arrow hitting a target = plonk
2 cold water hitting a hot piece of metal = sizzle
3 a startled noise made by a bird = chirp
4 the sound made by an unhappy puppy = whimpering
5 a piece of paper being screwed up = scrunch
6 a juicy, ripe tomato hitting the floor after being dropped = plop
7 big waves hitting rocks = swoosh
8 tyres on a wet road = screech

Exercise 3

Sports reports often use alliteration in their headlines for impact. 
Write four sports headlines for a newspaper. Use alliteration to give an impact.

Sport
Headline
Rugby

The Tired player Tackled and Tripped
Hockey

Intramural hockey is a Strenuous, Simulating, Satisfying sport.
Soccer

The Stupendous Skilled Soccer player scored a Spectacular goal.
Golf

The Golf Game was Going quite badly.

Thursday, 5 September 2019

Persuasive Writing

Bees are the most important creature on the planet


Gather Ideas

1. Bees get pollen to create honey
2. Bees help make the world a better place
3. Without bees honey doesn't exist
4. Losing bees would be a nightmare


Organise Ideas

1. Bees get pollen to create honey
2.Without bees honey doesn't exist
3. bees aren't as harmful as you think.

Introduction

Bees are the most important creatures on this planet because they get pollen to create honey, without bees honey wouldn't exist and lastly bees are harmless creatures to the world.

We all know that bees get pollen and they take it back to the hive to create honey, except there is much more complex in that situation than it seems because bees take hard work to collect pollen a reason for this is that it might rain on that day or there may be strong winds. A bee could simply die just by collecting pollen that's what makes them the most important creature on the planet.

Another reason is that without bees honey wouldn't exist, that would be a complete nightmare if that happened because kids that love honey would get upset and parents would also get upset, some people might even get frustrated with the situation. An example for this would be not being able to eat honey on toast of eating honey with anything to be exact and that's why I think that bees are very important creatures.
Some people think of bees as dangerous creatures that gives you bee stings and give you pain and frustration it's like walking on pins and needles except it just how your body is feeling after a bee sting, for example bees are harmless because they would only sting you if they think you are harming them. What you do is just stay still and then let them fly away then you will know they aren't so harmful as you think.

bees are the most important creature on the planet because they get or collect pollen to create honey, without bees honey wouldn't exist and finally they aren't as harmful as you think.

Tuesday, 20 August 2019

Persuasive Writing pt 2

Owning more stuff makes you happier

Gather ideas:

1. Buying new things every month
2. Being rich and having a lot of things
3.Owning a bunch of stuff
4.Knowing how much thing you own.

Organise Ideas:

1. Buying new things every month.
2. Being rich and having a lot of things.
3. knowing how much you own.

Monday, 19 August 2019

Write that Essay Sentences


WALT: Identify WTE sentences to improve our writing.



1. Simple sentence: H.H.S is moving in to Ngā Kāhui.

2. Very short sentence: Ngā Kāhui is one of a kind.

3.  The Power Sentence: Exploring a new built environment with amazement

4. Red, White, and Blue:  Moving to Ngā Kāhui is Unbelieving, joyful, and Amazing.

5. The Adverb Start: Gladly HHS student are moving into the new buildings.

6. Begin with a preposition: Quickly time is coming for everyone to move into the new buildings.

7. The -ing start: 
Seeing a new learning space, gives respectful and grateful thoughts on the environment.

8. The - Ed start: 
Committed and taking responsibility to care and look after the 
Ngā Kāhui buildings.

9. The Semi- Colon:
The time and work put into to action; has given a positive outcome to our school.

10. The Em-Dash: The Ngā Kāhui buildings------with commitment and responsibility------- will be forever grateful learning space.

11. The W- Start: While students wildly wildly amazed, by the knowledgeable learning environment.

12. Explore the subject: The big move has been planned for a number of years and the build will be completed at the end of the term.

Tuesday, 6 August 2019

Persuasive Writing pt 1

Drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport 


Gather Ideas:

  1. Health Risk "There health will be at risk and it could damage their Career".
  2.  Sports Fans. Their fans could get very upset or they won't like them.
  3. Performance Enhancing Drugs: Them doing well in a game is a great thing to do but using drugs can affect your body.
  4. Sportsmanship: It wouldn't be good to have drugs in your body while playing a sport because of your sportsmanship it also wouldn't be fair for the opposite team.
  5. Breathing:Depressant drugs such as cannabis, alcohol and opiates, slow down your breathing.

Organise Ideas:

1. Health Risk
2. Sports Fans
3. Breathing

Introduction

 Drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport because of the danger to your body, it is also a health risk, sports fans will get affected and drugs affecting your breathing.

Some people may not give much thought to their health when playing sports other than eating healthy, drinking water and getting enough exercise, except having drugs in your system would be very upsetting to others around you, for example you might be feeling different not only physically but also mentally and spiritually.



Famous players wouldn't be the same if it wasn't for their fans cheering them on during a game. If your fans found out they had drugs in their body  fans could get very upset and feel very down.  When the drugs go down the drain (out of their system) fans would have more positive thoughts and stay thinking positive same with a smile on their faces.


Breathing is a key when playing a sport. The reason for this is oxygen into your lungs and it generates energy for you to carry on in the game, an example could be say if you are running and you breathing starts to slow down and you start to get a weird feeling this is why drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport.



As I said before drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport because of the affects it has on your whole body and your life. The symptoms have been shown in the risk it has on your health also known as health risk, the people supporting you also called sports fans and lastly your breathing and how it affects you.