Persuasive Writing pt 2

Owning more stuff makes you happier

Gather ideas:

1. Buying new things every month

2. Being rich and having a lot of things

3.Owning a bunch of stuff

4.Knowing how much thing you own.

Organise Ideas:

1. Buying new things every month.

2. Being rich and having a lot of things.

3. knowing how much you own.

Write that Essay Sentences

WALT: Identify WTE sentences to improve our writing.

1. Simple sentence: H.H.S is moving in to Ngā Kāhui.

2. Very short sentence: Ngā Kāhui is one of a kind.

3.  The Power Sentence: Exploring a new built environment with amazement

4. Red, White, and Blue:  Moving to Ngā Kāhui is Unbelieving, joyful, and Amazing.

5. The Adverb Start: Gladly HHS student are moving into the new buildings.

6. Begin with a preposition: Quickly time is coming for everyone to move into the new buildings.

7. The -ing start: 
Seeing a new learning space, gives respectful and grateful thoughts on the environment.

8. The - Ed start: 
Committed and taking responsibility to care and look after the 
Ngā Kāhui buildings.

9. The Semi- Colon:
The time and work put into to action; has given a positive outcome to our school.

10. The Em-Dash: The Ngā Kāhui buildings------with commitment and responsibility------- will be forever grateful learning space.

11. The W- Start: While students wildly wildly amazed, by the knowledgeable learning environment.

12. Explore the subject: The big move has been planned for a number of years and the build will be completed at the end of the term.

Persuasive Writing pt 1

Drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport 

Gather Ideas:

1. Health Risk "There health will be at risk and it could damage their Career".
2.  Sports Fans. Their fans could get very upset or they won't like them.
3. Performance Enhancing Drugs: Them doing well in a game is a great thing to do but using drugs can affect your body.
4. Sportsmanship: It wouldn't be good to have drugs in your body while playing a sport because of your sportsmanship it also wouldn't be fair for the opposite team.
5. Breathing:Depressant drugs such as cannabis, alcohol and opiates, slow down your breathing.

Organise Ideas:

1. Health Risk

2. Sports Fans

3. Breathing

Introduction

 Drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport because of the danger to your body, it is also a health risk, sports fans will get affected and drugs affecting your breathing.

Some people may not give much thought to their health when playing sports other than eating healthy, drinking water and getting enough exercise, except having drugs in your system would be very upsetting to others around you, for example you might be feeling different not only physically but also mentally and spiritually.

Famous players wouldn't be the same if it wasn't for their fans cheering them on during a game. If your fans found out they had drugs in their body  fans could get very upset and feel very down.  When the drugs go down the drain (out of their system) fans would have more positive thoughts and stay thinking positive same with a smile on their faces.

Breathing is a key when playing a sport. The reason for this is oxygen into your lungs and it generates energy for you to carry on in the game, an example could be say if you are running and you breathing starts to slow down and you start to get a weird feeling this is why drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport.

As I said before drugs shouldn't be allowed in sport because of the affects it has on your whole body and your life. The symptoms have been shown in the risk it has on your health also known as health risk, the people supporting you also called sports fans and lastly your breathing and how it affects you.