Persuasive Writing pt 2

Owning more stuff makes you happier

Gather ideas:

1. Buying new things every month

2. Being rich and having a lot of things

3.Owning a bunch of stuff

4.Knowing how much thing you own.

Organise Ideas:

1. Buying new things every month.

2. Being rich and having a lot of things.

3. knowing how much you own.

Introduction

Thinking that owning more things would make you happier? I know that there are two sides to this topic basically the goods and the bad's such as buying new things every month, being rich and having a lot of stuff and lastly knowing how much things you have.

Buying new things every month is one hundred times worse then buying things every four months the things you might buy clothes, cars, cakes and a huge load of things. One negative to buying new things every month is that you can run out of money either fast or slowly, an example for this is that you may have been buying a heap of things  and it got to the point where  you lost your job then ran out of money form then on until you got another job.

Being rich and having a lot of stuff and not knowing how much things you have. One negative is that you may start throwing away precious and expensive things because of buying new expensive things every month and it also shows that you simply don't care that you are throwing away things other people could use. 

Knowing the amount of stuff you have is very important because you could have a overload of things. You may not have a lot of space left in your house causing to your overload of your things for example you could decrease this disaster by giving some stuff away to others or making a donation to charity or to family members that may not have much and need more things