Persuasive Writing

Bees are the most important creature on the planet

Gather Ideas

1. Bees get pollen to create honey

2. Bees help make the world a better place

3. Without bees honey doesn't exist

4. Losing bees would be a nightmare

Organise Ideas

1. Bees get pollen to create honey

2.Without bees honey doesn't exist

3. bees aren't as harmful as you think.

Introduction

Bees are the most important creatures on this planet because they get pollen to create honey, without bees honey wouldn't exist and lastly bees are harmless creatures to the world.

We all know that bees get pollen and they take it back to the hive to create honey, except there is much more complex in that situation than it seems because bees take hard work to collect pollen a reason for this is that it might rain on that day or there may be strong winds. A bee could simply die just by collecting pollen that's what makes them the most important creature on the planet.

Another reason is that without bees honey wouldn't exist, that would be a complete nightmare if that happened because kids that love honey would get upset and parents would also get upset, some people might even get frustrated with the situation. An example for this would be not being able to eat honey on toast of eating honey with anything to be exact and that's why I think that bees are very important creatures.

Some people think of bees as dangerous creatures that gives you bee stings and give you pain and frustration it's like walking on pins and needles except it just how your body is feeling after a bee sting, for example bees are harmless because they would only sting you if they think you are harming them. What you do is just stay still and then let them fly away then you will know they aren't so harmful as you think.

bees are the most important creature on the planet because they get or collect pollen to create honey, without bees honey wouldn't exist and finally they aren't as harmful as you think.